The Robin

Is your song of spring a welcoming? for you are welcome,so sing.

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/17/2008 8:01:00 AM

I remeber when we were kids, My brothers and I would look out our back door to see the first robin in spring. We used to break up the last crusts of bread and put them out in the yard so the birds would come. Vince

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 5:45:00 AM

Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday dear Ann, Happy birthday to you. God bless you on your birthday. No I'm not psychic. I read your comment on Christie Moses poem. This write is wonderful. Michael Torres

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/17/2008 5:27:00 AM

Love the directness of this write as you speak one on one to the robin, letting it know your feelings as well as its effects. Beautifully written. Michael

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/15/2008 6:52:00 PM

So sing, darn it , sing. Very nice. I'm afraid spring is not coming any time soon..except in our hearts. BG