The Roaring Storms Pursue Us

The storm becomes darker roaring like a lion,
Freezing the pieces that are left behind this broken heart,
Times up… 
What we once knew isn't clear anymore,
Once lovers are now zombies chasing us in this apocalypse I call life,
Our haters that bully us become our worst nightmares,
But yet they give us fuel to keep going, not giving up half way there,
Stay strong, young one, 
By the way is ok to be alone with no one by your side,
I stay away far away from everyone, for I do not trust society, 
Not even my own shadow do I stand close to…

Among us are crowds of strangers,
Some happy...some down...
Others fuming in a terrorizing sound
And as I am surrounded,
Though I am positively crowded,
I am so desperately alone here
As if these strangers never existed..
As if existence itself is merely a dream, 
A sleeping dragon's never-waking nightmare,
Withholding wisdom that a mere figment of the imagination
Could never DREAM to attain
Locked in this chamber of disdain
Oh how long have I waited
For some seaside rain
For the antidote that will heal all of these infected
To find true love resurrected

Don't be ashamed of this hope that clings on
Do not be torn by the majority that say you are wrong...
For within the depths of hate and darkness,
An indestructible strength will emerge
Immune from life's sickly, demented surge
A unique blood running through the body and soul
Creating in you depth, endurance...and control
Your heart will glisten in the tears all around
Because no matter what happens, you will always be moved
You will NEVER become a heart of stone
But a martyr fighting for what's right
In the hope that someday
Darkness will meet light
In a balance that will only generate
Smiles...and bountiful laughter

The storms will roar on in pursuit of our souls...
But their blows are so far behind us as we soar
Into an endless ocean-shimmering sky

Only love will drive us—and the rest that binds us—
Say goodbye 

-A collab with my good friend Guillermo Soto!!!  Thanks for writing to me, love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/1/2014 6:20:00 PM
This poem is so great i cant put into words just how much i love it:)
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Date: 6/21/2014 2:36:00 AM
Very inspiring determination in the shadow of despair Laura. There is great beauty and wisdom in this friendship and poetry. I find strength in this art of soul. Guillermo must be a true friend. I am happy you have hope in the storm. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/20/2014 10:53:00 PM
Good job!(:
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/21/2014 2:36:00 PM
Good job to you my friend. Thank you for writing this piece with me - means a lot. :}
Date: 6/20/2014 8:43:00 PM
Can I ever ask again to read a more hopeful poem than this ? I think not, for reading it has been the highlight of my day Thank you, Laura ! Love and Light--Keith
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