The Road Out of Hell

The Road Out of Hell


Went to see the Priest one Fall Saturday
Time to rejoin the Church...Live the Christian way

Father shocked me when he said my Mother was going to die
I wanted to cry

Deep down I wanted to hit him
For telling me my future was grim

His advice to me was find a wife
Start your own life

Stop hanging on to your Mom
Stop fighting with you Brother Tom

I left not liking what he had to say
His hard words made me stray

Well Father was right
Mom died one cold February night

I decided then it was God I would fight
Darkness falls...Absence of Light

I soon learned fighting with the Creator is a sin
So I stopped my fight and turned to Gin

The more I drank
The lower I sank

Depression and Drink put you on the Road to Hell
Sad to say you may even hear your own Death Bell

Somehow I stopped drinking and started writing
The more I wrote the less I felt like fighting

It took a long time
But I learned how to write lines that rhymed

And I thank God for lifting my Depression Spell
By allowing me to find my way to The Road Out of Hell


Joseph Adam Elward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/16/2010 7:35:00 AM
Welcome Joseph to Premier Membership.. on the Poetry Soup site... enjoyed reading your creative write today.. enjoy your new PM ..looking forward to your blog and bio soon..luv.. have a happy day and be blessed with luv..
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:24:00 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup. This is a beautiful write and states the paths you took to reach the realm of poetry. All is well that ends well. Keep writing. Best wishes. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:49:00 AM
From priest to god to gin to writing till the depression is lifted. nice flow of thoughts with good rhyming, Joseph
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