Sunlite Wanter Poet Verse

The Road of My Life Is Serpentine

The road of my life is serpentine,
Wavy and with High-Five traffic jams.
Bewildering to me, but not to God,
Someday He will pull it straight,
Like that Christmas ribbon that curls.
All I can do now is talk to Him,
And wait until the ribbon unfurls.

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Jennifer Proxenos May 24, 2019 at 10:21 AM A very clever write Sunlite Wanter - it touches the soul - a terrific write! Hugs, Jennifer

Ralph Sergi May 18, 2019 at 7:57 PM Hi Sinlite: This poem spoke to me as well. We all have experienced this road.My compliments and nice to know you.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. May 18, 2019 at 3:04 PM Amen. Wonderful poem and a great title. "Through faith and patience we inherit the promise." Hebrews Sunlite Wanter May 18, 2019 at 5:41 PM Thank you so much for that comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2019 at 1:41 PM - A fabulous writing, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2019 at 12:54 PM this just really spoke to me. Love it. FAVE

Heidi Sands May 17, 2019 at 12:33 PM This is great! I love the idea of the ribbon and your faith in this poem is so reassurijg . It is inspiring and gives hope ,:) Sunlite Wanter May 17, 2019 at 1:07 PM I am so glad it gives hope. Makes the writing worthwhile.

Nette Onclaud May 16, 2019 at 3:03 PM such a hopeful piece which lights my day, sun... a wonder to behold!... huggs Sunlite Wanter May 17, 2019 at 1:05 PM You light my day, too.

Tom Cunningham May 16, 2019 at 12:26 PM One day it will all be clear to us Sunlite until then we have to learn to be patient. Tom Sunlite Wanter May 17, 2019 at 1:05 PM Yes, patience comes hard. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Gershon Wolf May 16, 2019 at 11:15 AM This poem about sums it all up. Ours is to wait--'till God gets it straight! Patience is our earthly lot. Nicely imaged, Sunlite! Happy Thursday! ~ Gershon Sunlite Wanter May 17, 2019 at 1:03 PM Bless you!