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The Road of My Life Is Serpentine

The road of my life is serpentine, Wavy and with High-Five traffic jams. Bewildering to me, but not to God, Someday He will pull it straight, Like that Christmas ribbon that curls. All I can do now is talk to Him, And wait until the ribbon unfurls.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/24/2019 10:21:00 AM

A very clever write Sunlite Wanter - it touches the soul - a terrific write! Hugs, Jennifer

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/18/2019 7:57:00 PM

Hi Sinlite: This poem spoke to me as well. We all have experienced this road.My compliments and nice to know you.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/18/2019 3:04:00 PM

Amen. Wonderful poem and a great title. "Through faith and patience we inherit the promise." Hebrews

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/18/2019 5:41:00 PM

Thank you so much for that comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2019 1:41:00 PM

- A fabulous writing, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2019 12:54:00 PM

this just really spoke to me. Love it. FAVE

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/17/2019 12:33:00 PM

This is great! I love the idea of the ribbon and your faith in this poem is so reassurijg . It is inspiring and gives hope ,:)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/17/2019 1:07:00 PM

I am so glad it gives hope. Makes the writing worthwhile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/16/2019 3:03:00 PM

such a hopeful piece which lights my day, sun... a wonder to behold!... huggs

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/17/2019 1:05:00 PM

You light my day, too.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2019 12:26:00 PM

One day it will all be clear to us Sunlite until then we have to learn to be patient. Tom

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/17/2019 1:05:00 PM

Yes, patience comes hard. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 11:15:00 AM

This poem about sums it all up. Ours is to wait--'till God gets it straight! Patience is our earthly lot. Nicely imaged, Sunlite! Happy Thursday! ~ Gershon

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/17/2019 1:03:00 PM

Bless you!