The Road I Take

The Road I Take

Many roads there lie ahead
I wonder which to take
I glance down each and wonder
What difference it would make?

The signs I see upon the post
Are there for me to read
But don’t answer all my questions
Or satisfy my need.

I’m looking for a clue here
And really not quite sure
What happens if I go there
Will I be secure?

I know not what will happen
If I take road one or two
I stand here somewhat puzzled
And know not what to do.

The first looks kind of rugged
A challenge there for sure
And if I were to try it
Don’t know if I’ll endure.

The second has a hill so steep
Don’t know if I could climb
And if I even tried 
It would take some  time.

Another has a forest
Right there along its’ side
I fear that man or animal
Could choose that place to hide.

As I stand here somewhat puzzled
With these many roads ahead
Wondering which to travel
Where to start my tread.

I see the sun shine through the clouds
And suddenly I know
It’s how I travel on that road
And not on which I go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/12/2014 7:56:00 AM
Sue, wonderful . And deep. Congrats on the win... SKAT
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Date: 1/20/2014 3:11:00 PM
A didactic gem, Sue, Congrats. daver
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:14:00 PM
Sue, excellent contrasts in thought about choice, good use of form. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, sue
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:46:00 PM
congratulations Sue xx
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:36:00 PM
Sue, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2014 4:43:00 PM
Sue, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/5/2014 6:09:00 PM
Hello Sue so nice to meet you welcome to Soup, though the topic would be ok for my contest the form which is rhyme, specifically quatrain, can not be used for this challenge. You have used end rhyme, take/make//read/need//sure/secure. Please do try another using one of the unrhymed forms suggested and save this very good verse for another time. Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:39:00 PM
Sue, the sun's one of the most beautiful forms we have. Each journey makes us who we are. Not always a good thing. I do love this poem, the flow and deep imagery. amazing for a first poem...LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:34:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sue ! - Life's road .... it is not always sunshine - well written ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:33:00 PM
Sue K., ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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