The Road I Pave

The road I pave, made with sharp jagged stones, they represent all the hardships, I've had to over come. With pointed sharp shards, that will cut like a knife, these stones will show no mercy, they have an enticing invite. I've walked these same stones, many times in my life, only now have I chosen, to lay them in plain sight. Why would I pave a road. of such that will maim, an endless road of agony, it's only purpose is pain. My life has been a journey, with many twists and turns, so I pave this road for you (my children), to show you where I went wrong. Contest: #2 placed winners... - Destroyer ~ Poet 2nd Place M.Mahauariki © 2012
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A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:04 AM
MURRAY.. ANOTHER WONDEFUL WIN.. CONGRATS..PD
Merryman Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:33 PM
Congrats on your win, Murray! Love, Kim
Arno Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest Murray. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Murray, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD
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February 6, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Thank you everyone, uhhh? I write in the hopes my children can truly appreciate me for who I am and why I was the way I was... My writes merely denote what happens when you chose a path your not destine for. again thanks ....Muzz
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:55 PM
congrats Murray on a sensational second place win luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Congrats on your win..Very creative work..Sara
Williams Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Muzz congrats with this knockout poem..Dave
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Nice message Murray. Congratulations
Scholtz Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on your win Murray, love Elizabeth
Susan Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:53 AM
good ending. congrats on your win!
Bunton Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations!
Minardi Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Excellent writing on life.. I love how you ended this poem. A brilliant legacy that a father could give to his sons. Congrats on the win, Murray.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 6:02 AM
I love this poem and it is a well deserved win. The honesty and candor is refreshing and really touches me in a special way. Thank You for sharing it and you should be proud, because this is a great write. Congrats............S.Ronthorpe
Song Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Hi M & M. I read some of your poetry yesterday and was quite fascinated by it. Your work is new to me but rings a familiar theme. Enjoyed reading this winner this morning too. Congrats to you. You wrote of your life so eloquently here! Gwendolen
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February 6, 2012 at 3:45 AM
Very nice and you made me feel pain in there too. Congratulations Murray xx
Doland Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 1:07 PM
I liked it, but it was also sad I thought. And if it be true, I hope that it will all be better, it will end up in the right. -Halie lol
Mahauariki Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Thanks for the comment, ahh at a guess i'd say 95% of what I write are my own life experiences. Still trying to develop as a writer.
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