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The Road

I walk on a road It's cold, It's damp just alone walking the road The only thing I can hear is the wind The wind is telling me to go on, The snow starts to fall, hitting me on my face I wish for warmth but there is no such place what can I do?? Where should I go?? Thinking just makes me weak I must reach my greatest peak I've reached the end of the road and what do I find?? I find a wall with the words go behind I look behind this wall and close my eyes It's to bright, oh so bright I come to find I've reached my Paradise

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/13/2024 5:38:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:29:00 PM

marina, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:04:00 PM

Marina, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/27/2012 12:59:00 AM

I like this poem. your words paint the picture so well. Good write- JH

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/22/2012 1:20:00 PM

I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Marina. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2012 2:59:00 PM

This was a well written poem, like it alot Marina. - oxox love Anne-Lise