The Road

I walk on a road It's cold, It's damp just alone walking the road The only thing I can hear is the wind The wind is telling me to go on, The snow starts to fall, hitting me on my face I wish for warmth but there is no such place what can I do?? Where should I go?? Thinking just makes me weak I must reach my greatest peak I've reached the end of the road and what do I find?? I find a wall with the words go behind I look behind this wall and close my eyes It's to bright, oh so bright I come to find I've reached my Paradise
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Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:29 PM
marina, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Marina, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
J.T. Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 12:59 AM
I like this poem. your words paint the picture so well. Good write- JH
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 1:20 PM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Marina. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol
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March 14, 2012 at 2:59 PM
This was a well written poem, like it alot Marina. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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