The River of Rim

forever we talk 
on the river of rim

cutting its banks
under 
smothered stars and
a muted moon
it gushes through
fallen giants

whose dead limbs 
gather homeless crows 
 waiting for the sun...
 ...for tomorrow 
for
someone

 kind 
enough
to care for crows
for starlings 
for all less than
pretty things
all unappreciated
unloved 
and misunderstood

even me
when 
I don't honor
this "thing" 
I try not
to believe

you open your heart 
not once but thrice
good girls... just
 ...don't

but you're so nice
it hurts

so much...
I want to stay

full of hope
on my pillow
long after 
you leave
God or
somebody
help me please
is this love true
I wish I knew

but your cliff is
the only one 
worth jumping from

and  I leap 
into you

not too recklessly 
to hurt any thing

just drifting
like moon light
in your song

tomorrow 
with the poor
beggar crows
I'll come to feed
and I know you'll 
smile and welcome me
yeah... I will 
want to stay
and that's ok

(please, don't 
abandon me)

I sink
and I keep
coming back 

to drown
some more

(it's okay 
when you
close the door
I don't fear 
losing you
anymore)

loving as you are
these crows know 
you can't care 
for them forever

if they lose you
they won't starve 

oh, yes...
 ...my love
 
a cold, long, lonely winter
it has been
for us
for them
for everyone 
on the river of rim

we are our 
only warmth

yet 
on Valentines Day
(on Valentine's Day!)
we
tried to leave
didn't we...
 ...rather than face 
this "thing"
(I try not to believe)
only to start again 
where we left off
on the river of rim

now
apple blossoms 
buzz with bees
and cardinals nest
in those happy trees

yes 

I confess
I've dreamed
too deep

(uh-huh
like these ravens 
and these crows
if the hand
that feeds me 
has to go
I know

I'll survive
but I want to
 ...thrive)

rivers run deep
rivers run wide
they run to the sea
before they run dry

our banks 
have flooded
so many times
yet I don't-- 
--I can't
I won't 
let go

you're too 
good for me 

(so
I'm deaf
to this fear
I will trust 
and believe)

my good girl

run with me
we have our starlings
our ravens
our crows
our
bunnies, bees
and apple trees

it doesn't matter 
if these banks 
don't hold
and these trees

get swept away

let it rain 
for forty
days and nights 
again

if we let go
it's not 
our 
river of rim
no

and who will care for 
our starlings 
and crows

yeah... 
august 
september 
october
 ...I know
I am
was
never
really
...I know

who's keeping score

no

on the river of rim 
~ we just flow ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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