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The River Is Sighing

Last evening, I noticed the Ohio River is sighing As its waters flowed lazily toward the west, I wondered if old rivers might fear their dying. They tell me her fish are no good for frying, Technology prevents her from reaching a crest Last evening, I noticed the Ohio River is sighing. As I sat resting along the bank, I felt like crying, The view hindered by barges floating abreast I wondered if old rivers might fear their dying. I could see the pollution along her edges drying Not in negligible amounts, too much is manifest, Last evening, I noticed the Ohio River is sighing. A few civic-minded folks who care keep trying To clean up our waterways, doing their best, I wondered if old rivers might fear their dying. Tugs were anchored at the ship’s store buying I wondered if the tugs ever take on a guest, Last evening, I noticed the Ohio River is sighing I wondered if old rivers might fear their dying.
Written April 4, 2022 submitted to Brian Strand's Premier Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/5/2022 10:40:00 AM
I am sure this is not the only river that is sighing. Sadly, we pollute without thinking.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/5/2022 11:09:00 AM
I'm afraid so. It's heartbreaking what we are doing to our environment.
Date: 4/4/2022 2:52:00 PM
Brilliant Villanelle, Milton Not an easy form to write but this makes for a great one. I love the thoughts behind it and it flows like a river - great choice of form for the subject. SuZ
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Date: 4/4/2022 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your thoughtful comment, SuzD.

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