Aleta Pope Poet I do not know?

The River He Loved

The River He Loved
           
               The river he loved till the very end
               was it his enemy or his best friend?
               He knew the consequences,he could not swim
               yet he took his chances again and again
               He knew one day his luck would run out
               but I know the river was his friend and his chosen way out.

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Barbara Gorelick December 19, 2011 at 6:55 PM This is pretty darned good...I would try to pick a form..free verse or rhyme...maybe not end the last to lines with the same word..I do like the content..good work. BG