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The River He Loved

The River He Loved The river he loved till the very end was it his enemy or his best friend? He knew the consequences,he could not swim yet he took his chances again and again He knew one day his luck would run out but I know the river was his friend and his chosen way out.

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Date: 12/19/2011 6:55:00 PM
This is pretty darned good...I would try to pick a form..free verse or rhyme...maybe not end the last to lines with the same word..I do like the content..good work. BG
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