The River Gomati-Win

O grandma *Gomati, was born on thy bank
And born of a mother bearing your name
On all the yesterdays your water I drank
Am still the part of your pattern and frame.

My blood flows in thy stream meandering
It’s a kind of earthly immortality,
I stand by you and feel kinship endearing
Know not much about gods but your affinity

I learnt to strive, to sink and to seek depth ever
Simply Hydrogen and Oxygen doesn’t make water
Something third is needed to make you what you’re
Nobody knows except you Ma and your Creator.

                             *******
Dr. Ram Mehta
June29, 2011

Twelwth Place win in

Contest: best dedication poem by P.D.

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*Gomati is the name of the river in Gujarat State of India. My home town Dwarka 
where Lord Krishna ruled once, is on the bank of River Gomati. 

My mother too was born there and she was christened as Gomati after the name of the river.

Please click on the links below to see the pictures of River Gomati and the town Dwarka 
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Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 9:48 AM
I remember this one. I don't think I ever congratulated your win with it. Just stopping by to say hi. Luv, Andrea
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July 14, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Dr. Ram, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d
Johnson Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Lord Krisna smiled cos you beguiled, and spoke of his river...Gomati
Taylor Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Dr Ram. Outstanding piece. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:30 AM
congratulations on your win in p.d's contest :)
Warden Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:25 AM
My Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D...hugs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your exciting win in PD's contest with this stirring write and entry my friend.. beautiful presentation and images flowing..luv..enjoy..
Roberts Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:19 AM
congrats on your win in PD's contest Dr. Ram
Falotico Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Congrats my friend on this tender tribute..Michael
Hooten Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 7:57 AM
mmmm : )
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 11:39 PM
oh, is this what you blogged about? HOw nice to see the poem to go with those pictures, Dr. Ram.
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Enjoyed this so much Dr. Ram Mehta. Excellent and interesting write here. I love Quatrain writes too.
Johnson Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Great interesting verse Dr Ram, yes we have links to places and times oasises:) India did have it all back before Atlantis fall. Technology seem to come and leave on this planet, over aeons of time. Yes Yoga is good for the soul and calmness too. my problem is i'm semi literate....went to work as a boy, missed the education mostly :)
Long Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:29 PM
this was awesome and full of info. love it cory
Phookan Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Rivers are divine to us in India and you have nicely depicted the sacredness of this river Gomti and what a beautiful tribute to your mother who's her namesake...in UP you know Dr Ram, we say Gangaji and Jamnaji and I liked that when I first came here. Good Luck to you and Regards, gautami
Susan Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:23 AM
I like the sense of immortality you create in this piece. It reminds me of a book I read about a boy who had an experience in a river and consequently remembered every life he had when he was reincarnated. I will check your blog :)
Kapoor Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 7:21 PM
It’s a beauty you have sketched on the canvas of Poetry. For a moment I thought you are mentioning the river Gomti, which flows near Lucknow in U.P,India, but I saw your photo link & recollected the Gomti which you have mentioned & I had seen while visiting your wonderful town Dwarka. It’s a very touching write you have painted in this wonderful poem. My good wishes for your contest entry & thank your kind and precious comments on Radha's Love Song. Love and best wishes .Ravindra...Dr. Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 7:13 PM
excellent Dr. Ram.. like a beautiful Geography lesson luv.. majestic river .. wonderful information .. good luck in the contest.. appreciate the fantastic footnote..luv..
Rams Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:21 PM
it is a beautiful write, although i could'nt open up the link
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:17 PM
The best to you in the contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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