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The River Dreams

And the river dreams
Of reaching its’ endeavor,
In an everlasting flow.
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Beauty set aside
It flows its’ soothing ripples,
Towards its’ oceanic dream.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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Tyler Martin Date: 4/27/2009 10:40:00 PM Simplicity is this write, and masterful is your talent. Login to Reply

Abe Lopez Date: 4/18/2009 12:21:00 PM Never thought of it that way, but I guess a river also dreams. Login to Reply

Tyler Davis Date: 4/17/2009 11:55:00 PM Amazing how you describe the river's dreams. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/6/2009 12:22:00 PM Wonderful images, Raul! A river dreaming...what a lovely concept! ~ love, Carrie Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/6/2009 9:54:00 AM Truly beautiful in different ways. An outstanding write. Love, Shar Login to Reply

James Faulkner Date: 4/6/2009 9:26:00 AM amazing write with a a beautiful flow. love and peace:james Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 4/6/2009 7:26:00 AM Your words carry me away on the current, gently drifting to a place of openess and serenity. The visual image in this one is amazing. I could read work like this all day as it is truly comforting to the soul. I like this form though I have never personally tried it... I may have to get around to that. Great write friend. Smiles from Lolita Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 4/6/2009 6:55:00 AM This is wonderful Raul..thanks for introducing me to this new form..great writing. Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 4/6/2009 4:06:00 AM beautiful cadence and flow, Raul, love it, Jim Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 4/6/2009 3:45:00 AM Raul I've watched your writing transform over the past few months and I like where its going. Beautiful write. Login to Reply

Aleera De La Keur Date: 4/6/2009 2:51:00 AM Lovely write, Raul. As always, the talented Mr Moreno, Keep them coming, Love Aleera Login to Reply