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The River Dreams

And the river dreams Of reaching its’ endeavor, In an everlasting flow. * Beauty set aside It flows its’ soothing ripples, Towards its’ oceanic dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 10:40:00 PM
Simplicity is this write, and masterful is your talent.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:21:00 PM
Never thought of it that way, but I guess a river also dreams.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:55:00 PM
Amazing how you describe the river's dreams.
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:22:00 PM
Wonderful images, Raul! A river dreaming...what a lovely concept! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:54:00 AM
Truly beautiful in different ways. An outstanding write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:26:00 AM
amazing write with a a beautiful flow. love and peace:james
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:26:00 AM
Your words carry me away on the current, gently drifting to a place of openess and serenity. The visual image in this one is amazing. I could read work like this all day as it is truly comforting to the soul. I like this form though I have never personally tried it... I may have to get around to that. Great write friend. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:55:00 AM
This is wonderful Raul..thanks for introducing me to this new form..great writing.
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:06:00 AM
beautiful cadence and flow, Raul, love it, Jim
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:45:00 AM
Raul I've watched your writing transform over the past few months and I like where its going. Beautiful write.
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Date: 4/6/2009 2:51:00 AM
Lovely write, Raul. As always, the talented Mr Moreno, Keep them coming, Love Aleera
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