The River Dreams

And the river dreams Of reaching its’ endeavor, In an everlasting flow. * Beauty set aside It flows its’ soothing ripples, Towards its’ oceanic dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:40 PM
Simplicity is this write, and masterful is your talent.
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Never thought of it that way, but I guess a river also dreams.
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Amazing how you describe the river's dreams.
Richards Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Wonderful images, Raul! A river dreaming...what a lovely concept! ~ love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Truly beautiful in different ways. An outstanding write. Love, Shar
Faulkner Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 9:26 AM
amazing write with a a beautiful flow. love and peace:james
Townsend Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Your words carry me away on the current, gently drifting to a place of openess and serenity. The visual image in this one is amazing. I could read work like this all day as it is truly comforting to the soul. I like this form though I have never personally tried it... I may have to get around to that. Great write friend. Smiles from Lolita
Higgins Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 6:55 AM
This is wonderful Raul..thanks for introducing me to this new form..great writing.
Goff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 4:06 AM
beautiful cadence and flow, Raul, love it, Jim
Ginn Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Raul I've watched your writing transform over the past few months and I like where its going. Beautiful write.
De La Keur Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 2:51 AM
Lovely write, Raul. As always, the talented Mr Moreno, Keep them coming, Love Aleera
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