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The River

Beginning high in the mountains the steep slopes give power to the raging river. It is an unstoppable force descending down, influenced only by the pull of gravity. The power to cut granite, impulsive in its course, persistence is its virtue. Momentum gains, turbulence are many, and the excitement is abundant in the beginning. Over the gently sloping plain the pace of the river becomes less urgent. Still guided by an invisible, immovable force, it is settling in for a wonderful journey. A more whimsical course, sufficient influence to cut the earth, determined to move forward. Slow and steady the new mantra, occasional patches of rapids reminisce the exhilaration of youth. Onward the expedition continues without concern for the destination. It relents to the forces that act upon it indifferent to their root. The river moves with power, fanciful in nature, enduring all encounters. Such is the story of the river and the story of our love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2013 11:57:00 AM
Kelley, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Kelley Slay
Date: 5/25/2013 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, I'm sure I will take you up on that sometime. I never feel like they are finished, will change things every time I read my own work... never completely happy. I might have a problem lol.
Date: 5/23/2013 1:26:00 AM
i love ur poem it was awesome
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Kelley Slay
Date: 5/25/2013 10:21:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 5/21/2013 2:20:00 PM
It's funny how riding a river is about the same as climbing a mountain, especially if we don't know how to wade through the tide. This was exceptional.
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Kelley Slay
Date: 5/22/2013 2:21:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback.

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