The River

High upon the Mountain top,
it begins as but a stream
meandering it's way through the valley,
it awaits the coming Spring

Atop the highest peak, covered in snow,
it seems so close to the sun
as winter, rounds the corner to March,
the meandering stream, begins to run

Quiet crystal clear pools, soon will fill,
to almost the size of a lake
as fish appear small at first,
I beheld a vision of something only God could make

As I closed upon what my eyes beheld,
I heard the sound of thunders mighty clap
the mist arose, to a fevered height,
a three hundred foot, Majestic Cataract

Beyond the falls, a bit farther down,
I see the sheets of Granite steps
as the river rumbles over them,
Salmon, swim, upstream with yearning , their attempts

My journey, takes me farther still,
to where it begins to slow
so deep, so wide, so grand,
I wonder, how many have seen this show

The River ends so masterfully,
like it's very life were at stake
it opens up so willingly,
into a Pristine Mountain Lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dufresne Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 4:24 PM
let me round the comments off to an even seven.once again I think this is a cool poem, Soup mail Rick.
Fraser Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Richard, what a delightful journey you have taken us readers on. A most beautiful piece. Thank you for pointing out my slight grammar error on Darklands, much appreciated >> James
Dufresne Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Cool Richard! You brought me on a sight seeing tour and I never left the farm! Like especially the last 2 verses.Don't quite know what happened or how you managed it but I feel like I'm still there ..as the river. Great poem. -Robert
Kapoor Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 8:13 AM
Great poem. Outstandingly beautiful and brilliantly lovely. You have painted a journey of river so beautifully that I was feeling as if I am flowing with the stream right from the top till it disappeared in the lake. Thank you for such a lovely poem & lot many thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Portrait of Jesus. Incidentally I have traced that Portrait now shining in the house of my senior friend Mr. J F Patteson & brilliantly preserved by him in the last 36years. Ravindra
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 7:13 AM
A beautiful majestic scene you have painted here with words my dear. Excellent imagery! Love it...and I love you! ~Mary
Delacroix Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 11:04 PM
Awesome view well presented in this quatrain, Taz. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Mcgraw Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 9:04 AM
Well Done!
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