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The Ritual

Raspy rich voices full of stank defeat blend into the backdrop of early morning Blood shot eyes cling to withered memories of lost splendor Desire cries to lick the fruit of possibility yet they are unable to free themselves from the hug of death The cankerworm has crawled into the garden of their youth and devoured its glory What's mistaken as a yearning to box against the wind like a virgin finding love for the very first time is nothing more than unsung lullabies floating around at the bottom of a forty ounce

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:51:00 PM
Cynthia - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/24/2008 7:15:00 PM
The ritual is a gem. thanks for posting it!! It deserves to be featured.
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Date: 10/24/2008 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on "The Ritual" being featured, Cynthia. Vince
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Date: 10/22/2008 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2008 6:16:00 AM
Very well done, sad but to the point! Congratulations on the featured poetry this week! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/19/2008 9:48:00 PM
Cynthia congrats on having your poem featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations Cynthia on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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