The Ritual

Raspy rich voices full of stank defeat
blend into the backdrop of early morning
Blood shot eyes cling to withered memories
of lost splendor
Desire cries to lick the fruit of possibility yet
they are unable to free themselves from the
hug of death
The cankerworm has crawled into the garden
of their youth and devoured its glory
What's mistaken as a yearning to box against
the wind like a virgin finding love for the very first 
time is nothing more than unsung lullabies floating
around at the bottom of a forty ounce
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:51 PM
Cynthia - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2008 at 7:15 PM
The ritual is a gem. thanks for posting it!! It deserves to be featured.
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October 24, 2008 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on "The Ritual" being featured, Cynthia. Vince
Brown Avatar
October 22, 2008 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 6:16 AM
Very well done, sad but to the point! Congratulations on the featured poetry this week! ~Carrie
Jordan Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 9:48 PM
Cynthia congrats on having your poem featured this week - God Bless
Winter Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 4:00 PM
Congratulations Cynthia on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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