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The Rising Sun of Dawn

Which words may lay at rest, While my heart still beats for her, 'Til my dying breath, Lays a faint whisper? All that has begun, Is a love in modest bloom, Like the rising sun, Meant to light a sky of blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/16/2018 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic piece, that is filled with love for the beloved! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 3/25/2018 11:18:00 PM
A romantic lyricist! There cannot be too many of you around; a lucky lady methinks!
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Date: 3/25/2018 11:09:00 PM
Very lovely Honesty!! Enjoyed reading..
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