The Rising Sun of Dawn

Which words may lay at rest,
While my heart still beats for her,
'Til my dying breath,
Lays a faint whisper?
All that has begun, 
Is a love in modest bloom, 
Like the rising sun,
Meant to light a sky of blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful, romantic piece, that is filled with love for the beloved! Best regards. Pandita
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 11:18 PM
A romantic lyricist! There cannot be too many of you around; a lucky lady methinks!
B. Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Very lovely Honesty!! Enjoyed reading..
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