The Rising of the Ocean

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The Rising of the Ocean
The North Atlantic Ocean's rising 
Glaciers are melting as are ice caps 
Global warming wants some refining.

Sadly Earth is craving devising
Planets climate is reaching climax
The North Atlantic Ocean's rising.

Humankind must do their revising
For now is the time to up the act 
Global warming wants some refining.

Ensuing days are traumatising 
For future generations that's fact
The North Atlantic Ocean's rising.

To breathe we so need tree investing
Too many have been felled in the past
Global warming wants some refining.

Our world badly wants redesigning
Changes brought on must be made to last 
The North Atlantic Ocean's rising 
Global warming wants some refining.

22nd April 2021
( Poem Form - Villanelle )
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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/23/2021 5:40:00 AM

Wonderful entry, friend. I love it. So very true. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/23/2021 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Gina, God bless you dear friend. Love Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2021 1:11:00 AM

We celebrate Earth Day and do nothing about it. Thanks for reading my poems.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/23/2021 5:08:00 AM

That’s true, thank you Victor. It’s always a pleasure to read your poetry... Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/22/2021 5:15:00 PM

Hi Belle, You have penned a well-written write about global warming. It is indeed a global concern. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/22/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, very much indeed, both the comments and best wishes. Bless you... Belle :-)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/22/2021 2:03:00 PM

a perfect poem for earth day, belle! best of luck in the contest...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/22/2021 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Ilene, I didn’t know it was earth day, what a coincidence... Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2021 1:49:00 PM

excellent villanelle i do enjoy writing this challenging form... as for the state of the oceans and the world in general man has so much to answer for:-( hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/22/2021 4:07:00 PM

I enjoy the challenge of a villanelle too... I agree man has lots to answer for. Thank you! Hugs, Belle :-) xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/22/2021 11:59:00 AM

Fear naught as the Bible assures us the Resurrection will erase all of our mistakes and make this world the perfect place to live, so hang loose .....Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/22/2021 12:14:00 PM

Probably so Rico, whilst we wait for a perfect dwelling place we need to give a helping hand to see things go as they were planned... Thank you, Belle