Arn Ban Poet Rhyme

The Rise of the Phoenix

for when the wind blows strong,

its tough to withold ur ground,

 the surface withers, scars are formed,


 but its the time your skills are honed,

your vigour may weaken, you may go down,

but u should know not to frown,

for all that matters is what you desire,


to be reborn from your ashes or,


just burn in that fire !

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Beata Agustin July 22, 2024 at 7:36 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 10:06 AM arn, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 2:17 PM ARN, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Ovidiu Bocsa January 29, 2015 at 12:53 PM Poetical creation is lived with intensity by each great poet.Congrat. and all the best!

Dorian Petersen Potter January 26, 2015 at 8:39 AM Very nice pen Arn Ban! Enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 from me!Have a very nice day! The best to you! Blessings! D. ^O^ Arn Ban January 26, 2015 at 9:23 AM thank you dorian :)

Seren Roberts January 26, 2015 at 7:54 AM Nicely written Arnie.....Seren Arn Ban January 26, 2015 at 7:57 AM thank you :)