Get Your Premium Membership

The Rise of a Blood Stained Phoenix

I plummet to the earth, Like a meteor. With head still pointed, Towards the heavens that shine in the sky. Body and soul raved by the fall. And Yet I still rise out of the rubble, Like a phoenix with bloodstained wings. I look towards the heavens in the sky once more, Then I fly higher and higher with, More determination than ever. For if heavens won’t come to me, Then I will simply soar towards them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/10/2010 6:51:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem. The last two lines explains the spirit of the whole poem
Login to Reply
Date: 5/10/2010 6:33:00 PM
wow, i love this one, i like the first two lines
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things