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Written for my granddaughter's recent engagement.

 

The Ring

The Ring
By Franklin Price
8/8/2017
(For Bella and Dalton)


The ring is very beautiful
And the future that's therein
The thought with which was given
Life together to begin

My wish for you is happiness 
That's for the both of you 
May you always work together
In everything you do

Not always fifty fifty
Always some give and take
Understanding one another
A relationship to make

Luck can't make it happen
Working hard can make it so
Love's  now between the two of you 
Together make it grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/8/2017 11:28:00 AM
Very nicely done :)
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Franklin Price
Date: 8/8/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and comments
Date: 8/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
Sounds like a proud papa write, well done Franklin...
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Franklin Price
Date: 8/8/2017 10:28:00 AM
You said it...I am very proud
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