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Written for my granddaughter's recent engagement.

 

The Ring By Franklin Price 8/8/2017 (For Bella and Dalton) The ring is very beautiful And the future that's therein The thought with which was given Life together to begin My wish for you is happiness That's for the both of you May you always work together In everything you do Not always fifty fifty Always some give and take Understanding one another A relationship to make Luck can't make it happen Working hard can make it so Love's now between the two of you Together make it grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/8/2017 11:28:00 AM
Very nicely done :)
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Franklin Price
Date: 8/8/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and comments
Date: 8/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
Sounds like a proud papa write, well done Franklin...
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Franklin Price
Date: 8/8/2017 10:28:00 AM
You said it...I am very proud

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