The Ring

It was meant for friendship and love,
a vow that cannot be undone.
Around my neck it brings memories good and bad,
through the day's living happy or sad.
 
Not worn for failure or an excuse to move on,
taking it off, all my efforts will be gone.
Yet I wear it still in my dark days with hope,
Dedication, compassion, understanding are embedded
with this yoke.
 
I can't give up now even as we're apart,
doing so will mean I never loved you from the start.
For better for worse, for rich or for poorer, till
death do us part,
this ring I wear with all of my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Lucas Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 5:28 PM
What an image of commitment!! Excellent!! Wood
Richards Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 6:23 PM
This was a heartbreaker to read, but so well done. A sad fact so many have gone through. You did a beautiful job with the poem, yet sadness is felt. Well deserved to be featured here. ~ Carrie
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November 3, 2008 at 2:09 PM
What a beautiful vision on the commitment of love. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Winter Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 8:56 AM
Beautiful poem Jon. Congrats on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:35 AM
Jon very beautiful - stay strong in your love - congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:19 AM
An oldie and certainly a goodie Jon. Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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November 2, 2008 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on the refeaturing of "The Ring." Hope all is going well. God Bless. Vince
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