The Right Man - Collaboration

Prince of no state
But of my heart 
Reader of the stars
Interpreter of  my eyes
Someone just like me
Will enter my life
Not late, but very soon
And together we will build 
A palace on the top
Of that lush green mountain 
Our Kingdom will be named Eden
And we will be its sole rulers. 

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August 26, 2020
For contest: MAX 12 LINES - poem-inspired prompt Poetry Contest, sponsored by 
Line Gauthier. 

Original poem:

THE WISE WOMAN

Reader of the stars
Sees in crystal ball
Woman of your dreams
Will enter your life
A princess no doubt
Someone just like me
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Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 8:45 AM
A fine morn it is. To find the beauty and see the glow in the very fine poem that you have created and gifted we readers with, my friend. A fav-- God bless..
Zahid Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:33 AM
Aw no, you are blessed with a very aesthetic mind, that sees beauty in everything. My must is still in the category of illiterates. Trust me.
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 1:07 PM
I like the way you wove line's poem in with yours so seemlessly:-) hugs jan xx
Zahid Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thanks Jan
Proxenos Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 6:32 AM
I'm certain Line will enjoy your entry Paghunda, very creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 8:41 AM
I hope you meet the right man.... Would be nice to see you write a ghazal for my contest ..
Zahid Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Would have love to... But I can not write Ghazal. way too difficult too compose.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 2:45 PM
wonderful collaboration poem!
Zahid Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Thank you Andrea
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