The Right Key

The other day You did pull those curtains back ever so gently as you exposed me to the light With your opening of windows I could breathe again The air rushing in I looked at you and a tear jumped from the corner of my eye I knew your love was never a lie For you’re the only one that has found the right key That key engages the happy me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Loveiam Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 11:00 PM
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Devnath  Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Tear of corner eye does not tell lie. Thanks for sharing O'neal. bl
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:26 PM
lovely piece Jay and for sure the right key opens all doors of emotion to great lasting luv.. super entertaining write luv..
Beadnall Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Lovely write, i too am very happy in love. PS thank you for kind encouraging comment and top marking on my poem , " Nothing ever lasts forever " blessings Paul
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