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The Right Diagnosis

Lancing, shooting pain Stabs to the left side - sternum Doctor notes: Love lost

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Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 10:47:00 AM

Ray, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **

A. H. Sewell

Date: 4/29/2015 10:55:00 PM

Wonderful haiku, Ray! Brief but poignant! 7!

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2015 7:44:00 PM

Hi Ray, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Deep and very well written Haiku, Ray - Love haikus .... I've written 48 :))) - Welcome to P-Soup :) - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:31:00 AM

Ray,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/7/2015 11:46:00 PM

"Love lost". That's all I can say. Blessings