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The Rift

Through the torn surface with edges curled I writh, through the never ending rift of light. The torn sheath, its parchment colored white beckons, surface fears squirm in angst unfurled. With edges curled, adepts display the night. I writh, diving inward laughing, almost contrite through the never ending spiral, I am hurled. Rifts of light on onyx night chose to reunite, within the torn sheath a birthing infinite. I writh, its parchment, a mere veneer, parts swirled colored white,as dense as night, its content bright beckons, bringing finer truths to all that's right, through the torn surface with edges curled. Poet: Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/31/13 Contest:GLIMPSES OF EPIPHANY

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Date: 8/5/2013 10:14:00 AM
great poem. Congrats on your win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:42:00 AM
the kind of imagery nette loves!! Congrats on your win, Debs. Well deserved.
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Date: 8/3/2013 9:34:00 PM
what a poem.... :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/3/2013 9:07:00 PM
congrats...PD
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Date: 8/3/2013 5:48:00 AM
hi Debbie congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/3/2013 12:02:00 AM
the awareness of knwoung all wil be right amazes, debbie... what a solid, humane write.. is this rhyme?... congrats on your fine win in my contest.. do check my blog for my remarks..:) huggs
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:45:00 PM
Well done and congratulations Debbie.
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:26:00 PM
congrats on your win Debbie
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations..
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Date: 8/2/2013 7:47:00 AM
There is a lot to absorb here. I think there is to much swirling around here and it does not feel like an epiphany.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2013 7:48:00 AM
Upon re reading I see where you are going with it because it is glimpses, it makes total sense.

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