The Ride

"Come take a ride with me"
 That’s what he said
 The conservative side of me
 Almost jumped out and said;

"huh uh, I don't do roller-coasters"
 but the look on his face
 prompted me to change my mind
as if to say
you don't know what you're missing,


he has thrown down the gauntlet,
and don't I love a challenge! 
I didn't need a second invitation
as soon as I was strapped in,

it started to move slowly,
thinking to myself
"I can handle this; it’s a piece of cake, 
not scary at all"
What the hell? 
Who was I kidding?

midway through the first lap,
it started to bounce up
and just as quickly 
it skid down again


I grabbed the bars 
to stable myself in the seat
leaving marks on my hands
as I dug my fingernails deeper,
into my own flesh.

Glancing across I can see 
my fellow revelers’ mouths moving,
but I can’t hear a word they're saying
it looks like one of those silent movies

all I can feel is my heart beating faster
and with every movement
praying for my safekeeping,

at the same time cursing  
this guy next to me
with a solemn promise
that if I live to tell the tale,

I will never allow myself 
to be talked into something 
this crazy again, 
even if the guy is as sexy 
as the one sitting next to me…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:53 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:53 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
A   Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Wilma, I like the take on your narrated poem.. I'm glad you obey your own limits.. and have standards.. congratulations with your featured poem of the week..... have yourself a very wonderful day ;-) LINDA
Austin Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Great idea, Wilma, and very well put down. Congrats on the selection. daver
Horsman Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:22 AM
love your featured poem, Wilma, and love the ride also. harry
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Wilma. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:38 AM
I enjoyed this write, I can't help but feel that anxiety with you--but I would have to say though that I love roller coasters, heehee as i've read before, it actually calls for "sanctioned screaming"--gotta love that! thanks as well for all your comments in my writes :) all that mention of chocolate is making me crave for some chocolate cake too--have to head off for dinner though--:) enjoy your day!
Cwiak Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:52 AM
Been there...done that. (But with a girl next to me.) Great write about those butterflies that overcome you just as the bar comes down, and you're thinking - "What am I doin' here?" Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:48 AM
Well penned and nicely expressed thoughts
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