The Rich Young Ruler

The Rich Young Ruler

A Rich Young Ruler came,
To see the Lord one day;
"What must I do"? He asked Him.
So he would be okay.

"What must I do to inherit?
Eternal life you see.
I’ve always been a good boy,
The people look at me".

“Keep the Ten Commandments”
“I do, and that’s the truth;
I keep the Ten Commandments
And I’ve kept them from my youth”

Then the Master noted,
“One thing still lackest thee”
Sell all your fancy riches, 
Take your cross and follow me.”

The Rich man left the Master,
His heart was filled with strife,
He’d rather all his riches 
Than to gain eternal life.

But here we see a blueprint,
Instructions if you will?
It was truth the day he spoke it
And surely it is still.

If we follow Jesus; 
He will cover any loss.
But first we have to follow Him
And take up His own dear Cross.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wolf Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 8:01 PM
This is beautifully done. Kudos on a wonderful poem with a timely message for the obscenely rich 'rulers' of today. Were they merely to 'tithe' their income, so many of the world's pressing problems --hunger, disease, freshwater shortages, etc.-- could be solved or ameliorated... ~ Gershon
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Dang! That read so smoothly in my head! Love it!
Daugherty Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Thank you so much! you made my day!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace