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The Ribbon

Looking down at her dead face I tie the ribbon in a foolish way The delicious fragility of her china doll complexion The atmosphere feels so heavy with this travesty Her loved ones will remember her smile and her laugh Looking into their tearful eyes I can see their one wish!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/17/2014 4:27:00 PM
hello Haiku Dragon , Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:35:00 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, HD
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Date: 3/16/2014 11:41:00 PM
Peacful. Haiku~stillness
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:15:00 PM
Whoa! I love this poem short but sweet. I especially like the line, "The delicious fragility of her china doll complexion."
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful but sad!
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