8/2/2025 for Rolling With The Rs Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
"River, ever flowing lazily to the sea, your ripples mesmerizing me, please, reveal the secret to your magic!" "I always move.", the river said, as to the sea, it led. "Yet, I remain"... river.
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