The Rhythm of Her Life

The Rhythm of her life

Without the beat
Her heart won’t flutter
Without the steps
Her life will stutter

A rhythm within
Drives her soul
A rhythm outwith
Makes her whole

The tune silent
To those around
The tune vibrant
Her inner sound

The music of life
A spring in her walk
The music of love
Flows when she talks

Sparkling smile
Happy she’s alive
Sparkling eyes
With beat she thrives

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/23/2016 9:43:00 PM
well done Laura
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/24/2016 6:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael!
Date: 8/11/2016 11:59:00 AM
You write with a composer's baton in your hand, Laura! Your words turn into music with flowing rhythm, beat and rhyme. Full marks to you! Warm regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2016 10:10:00 AM
This poem could easily have been written with a special daughter in mind! :) paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/12/2016 7:15:00 AM
Aww shucks, thanks so much for your kind comments Paul. This poem means a lot to me. Always appreciate your feed back! Warm Regards, Laura. :)
Date: 8/11/2016 5:32:00 AM
Vibrant write, really enjoyed it. smiles *ron*
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/11/2016 6:44:00 AM
Many thanks Ron! :)
Date: 8/10/2016 10:26:00 PM
sweet and rhythmic. I really like it, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/11/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, glad you liked it :)
Date: 8/10/2016 1:03:00 PM
fun to read and so much truth.I have always loved the rhythm and almost musical tones when woman speak.
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/11/2016 6:41:00 AM
Thank you for you kind comments Michael
Date: 8/9/2016 5:29:00 AM
As lovely as a brook ... as soft as a lyric ...
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Laura Hay
Date: 8/10/2016 6:30:00 AM
Sweet comment Probir, thank you!! Warm regards
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