The Reverencing Trees

in orange-glow mist
trees look upward to their Sun
and softly exhale

For Brian Strand's
TRIPLET any single three line form/any theme Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/16/2015 12:15:00 PM
clever * Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/10/2011 7:26:00 AM
Another #1! You have a hat trick!
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:40:00 AM
beautiful :)
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 12/7/2011 11:51:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, very nicely composed..David
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Date: 12/7/2011 11:43:00 AM
congrats in your win cory
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Date: 12/7/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
dreamy..magical verse congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2011 9:44:00 AM
Wonderful imagery.I missed this gem of you.Congratulations Andrea on your 1st place win in Brian's contest.
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:50:00 AM
Makes one feel a sense of peace. Congrats to you, Andrea!
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:53:00 AM
What a nice picture of nature, Andrea! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:24:00 PM
I just love these oxygen givers, pillars of pride >> James
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:56:00 AM
Hey Andrea, congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice...hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:20:00 PM
NICE.UR SMART.IM TOUGH IN PHYSICAL STRENGHT.LOLZ. N I LOOK LIKE IT TOO, I GOT DARK RED HAIR DAT GOES A LITTLE PASED MII SHOULDERS.A BAD GRL TATT N PIERCINGS EVERY WHERE.BUT I WISH I DIDN'T HAVE ALL OF THEM NOW DAT IM NOT A TEEN ANY MORE.N I HAVE A KID.BUT CAESAR SEEMS TO LIK EM ALL.LOLZ.LET MEE GUES, UH I SAY ABOUT UR 30 WITH DAT NAME? .bUfFy
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, I am getting so far behind in comments and returning thanks, but I will try , honest. :) :) luv Maggie
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:17:00 PM
did you win if so congratulations, i still do not even know how one knows when they win. Until someone spills the beans, hey have you seen who the real poet destroyer is. have you read Billy the Kidster poems he is funny. i guess he is me go find out . he wrote two more to P.D. he rats out the poet destroyer i am telling friends to go visit his poetry. how come when someone wins you do not know until you receive a comment. like when i got second place in a contest i did not even know,..p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea!! Enjoy your fantastic win in the contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/26/2010 4:30:00 PM
Geat write ...I can see why it is a winner..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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Date: 4/26/2010 1:34:00 PM
love the last line..excellent use of personification too! best of luck gal! Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:26:00 AM
A deserved win indeed! You write nature so well! Thanks for your lovely comments on my writes, re Taurus, yes indeed, I'm a 23rd...and Taureens tend to be more clever or imaginative and creative fronts rather than as clever academically.... Of course there are bound to be exceptions to the rule as many things interfere with astrology although it is not something I am overly familiar with I'm afraid... Keep writing! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on # 5 Andrea. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Raul's contest, Nature Breathes. We both are winners. Your Haiku is breath-taking Haiku...your words make me exhale like, " Trees look upward to the Sun and softly exhale. " I wish you continued success and more wins. Thanks for your kind comments, Andrea. God bless you. Have a wonderful day and smile. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 4/26/2010 8:53:00 AM
ooh, I love this. Very nice.
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Date: 4/26/2010 7:38:00 AM
The poem is about Parker Posy, a movie actress that completely captured my fancy in this one particular movie - can't remember the flick. This is Dickensian, making the inanimate come to life....well....I guess trees are alive, so........ummmm, almost delicious...yummm. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/26/2010 7:05:00 AM
Lovely poem Andrea....love that last line...softly exhales...terrific choice of words!! Well done...Congrats once again!!! love, Carrie
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