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The Revelation

As the candle flare flickers.. As your whispers float through the air.. As you look at me with your glowing eyes.. As I'm falling in love with you.. As I lay here with you.. As the waves of the ocean crash into the sand.. As I close my eyes.. As I exhale the breathe from my lungs.. The flame caught fire inside me. The words echoed in my mind. The real you was shown. The stars exploded. The rude awakening started. The moon pulled you back. The demons destroyed everything. The day the earth stood still. As the candle flare flickers.. As your whispers float through the air.. As you look at me with your glowing eyes.. As the sun fell down.. As the street lights turned on.. As the waves of the ocean crash into the sand.. As I close my eyes.. As I exhale the breathe from my lungs.. The flame caught the curtains on fire. The words echoed in my mind. The real you was shown. The stars exploded. The wolves came out. The birds stopped chirping. The nothing is happening. The world stopped spinning.

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Date: 1/11/2025 10:22:00 PM
Katlin, Reaped the whirlwind in a sudden change of course; in revelations. -Richard
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Date: 1/11/2025 10:56:00 PM
How about no. I know you all are demons and I'm not. I know yall are trying to put the evil spirit in me. Let's not attempt that. Thanks, Richard.

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