The Return of Earth To the Devout

Squadron assembled
Trojans and droids
Three sisters their target
Null to void
 
Atmosphere entered
Red to grey glow
As we near earths terrain
Red rivers flow
 
Cities on fire
Civilisation of pyres
No daylight sensed
Extinguished, by these darkened pariah's
 
The droids report back
These sisters three
In New York spotted
Near the Statue of Liberty
 
The decision is made
To take them out
To salvage the earth
Return to the devout
 
Kestrel fighters
With missiles primed
Head to the target
Mission define
 
On contact of hit
The heads explode
Filled with the souls
Of past earths abode
 
It has to take
The souls of the free
To rid these pariahs
For all eternity
 
In formation swoop
Waves of three
Triangular pincer
Missiles release
 
The first to fall
Kristy Krull
Two direct hits
This devout cull
 
Ale-era the Apocalypse
From the freedom torch falls
All three strike home
Liberty Island calls
 
Illyanna
The darkened leader
Whom the sisters follow
Pariah feeder
 
In Central Park
Her power failing 
Kestrels strike
The darkened flailing
 
The last entity
In blackened spew
Illyanna
Downed by the souls so true
 
It took many many years
For the deathly red to fade
For the earth to return
To it's previous glade
 
From the Jungles of Jupiter
A cry was heard
Mother earth is dying
Devout is our word



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/6/2009 5:27:00 AM
Oh my James you rhyme divine I just adored both parts and the story is great easy to follow from one too two :) the three sisters lead the way .. Love and thanks for your comments on my poems its nice to know people get some enjoyment out of them just one read is enough .. Jayne x x
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:58:00 PM
Mesmerizing, frightening and very powerful write, James! What a creative story! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:04:00 PM
To have an imagination is one thing. To be able to allow others to visulise your message through the written word is an art. Congratulations artist.
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Date: 8/29/2009 4:13:00 PM
Recomment,...this really made me excited after reading part one ! Awesome job James !!! james
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Date: 8/29/2009 6:58:00 AM
I was sitting on the edge of my seat. James this is ~~~Magnificent~~~. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 5:53:00 AM
I could see this as a vedio game james lol the imagery was astounding reminded me of ny getting hit again yikes loved your play on words here thanks for your kind comments also onmy work keep up the great writng
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Date: 8/28/2009 10:06:00 PM
WOW, James....... " The audience stands in uproar, clapping hands cause a thunderous beat, one you can almost sing to."...........AWESOME........:JP]
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Date: 8/28/2009 8:08:00 PM
what a fantastic journey James to what almost seems reality and no recover unless all put first our Lord ! Fantastic write my friend !! One thing about the Soup which I love,...the lot of souls here have faith !!! TY for your friendship !!!!!! james
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for taking us on this journey. Interesting perspective. I like the closing line. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:53:00 PM
Very imaginative. Keep writing. Sara
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