''The Response''

Beautiful , smart , outgoing 'was all the qualities she possessed thinking about her soft , and 
gentle hands as they rub against my chest....not knowing what im getting myself into i 
responded....turning her over kissing all the places i know she would like...then as i lay back 
while she goes on a journey they call ''hike''...not caring about the situation at hand i 
responded...genuinely rubbing her soft , and gentle skin...as i then made my way IN yet 
again....going and going and there seems to be no end...with a satisfaction guaranteed she 
slowly fell to her knees....doing what she did best...yet again i responded...picking her up placing 
her on the bed....and as my tongue went to work you can say i'd been FED....hours and hours 
flew by and im  still here....suddenly i hear a whisper in my ear...''wanna do this again tomorrow 
? '' yet again i responded kissing her beautiful lashing lips....not caring if i was one of those she 
called dips...as the time flew by and the sex grew stronger...i then responded i will do this no 
longer.......
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April 15, 2010 at 3:18 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 14, 2010 at 1:47 PM
So enjoyed your creative write tonight... continuations are always exciting.. my answer is YES..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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