The Rescuer

Solo bird Strayed in the Ocean sky, Prayed. Heaven sent Vulture, Appeared for rescue.
Date of Entry : 24-09-2020 Contest : Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor : Joseph May
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Proxenos Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.
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January 7, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Thanks for this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. (John 3:16 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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October 15, 2021 at 3:35 AM
Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Interesting piece. Thought provoking, a bit of teaser, with more than one meaning perhaps. If vulture sent by god its nature might be overridden to do good. A fantastic seven lines. I am impressed. David in NZ
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April 2, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Interesting thought.
Agustin Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 8:13 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile... Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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November 20, 2020 at 4:37 AM
This is great and awesome ! I wonder if you could explain what you picture. You mean a solo bird had strayed and prayed and then a vulture rescued it? Kudos. Congrats! .............................,.........>>>> Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too .
Proxenos Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Hi Jenish, Congrats on your win in Joseph 's contest, Have a wonderful weekend, Blessings, Jennifer.
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Very nicely penned Jenish, Congrats on your win..
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations Jenish! Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:53 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Interesting poem, Jenish, The power of prayer.
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Fascinating, Jenish. I always think of vultures in strictly negative terms. You've opened my eyes to a new dimension of the species. Thank you, Gershon
Bangalee Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:23 AM
so, savior is ready where destroyer schemes filthy
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 1:58 AM
- Great picture, Jenish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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