The Request

Fly with me on brilliant paper wings
Figures of smoke newly drawn pictures of love
Journey with hearts on fire with wheels
Shivering sighs and laughing smiles
Out of a cup of friendship arose a spirit
Glad to know you 
Glad to share some time 
Cardinal lips on rosebush hips 
Clouds with stories on crowns of glory 
Lazy rivers with running emotion 
Moon lit nights with passionate potions 
Hints of rising glass potpourri dishes 
And all those good night kisses
Lullaby sea grass singing your name 
Come fly with me on brilliant paper wings 
Love me at last utter like kings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Smile~"This Is So Brilliantly Sweet Laura!!!":):)~I can never tell "You" this enough~"You Are Extremely Wonderful & Gifted Writer!!!":):)~I loved the colors, the images, the thoughts and the flow within this "Amazingly Beautiful Write!!!":):)~So, As Always, "My Love To 'You & Your Loves Forever,' John!!!"~"Have A Beautiful Day Dear Laura!!!":):) Bye ~
Winter Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 5:21 AM
Simply beautiful Laura. Many awesome lines. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 2:48 PM
This is so lovely, a breathtaking and beautiful poem. One to make me smile today, Laura. ~ Best Wishes, Carrie
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