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The Refraction of Your Gaze

The Refraction of Your Gaze



The prism of your Rejection is held before me 

colors, breaking apart
to pierce my heart 
	with their meaning,
entering, 
	becoming:

the Violet of Penitence 
	though I seek not forgiveness
the Blue of Piety and Sadness
	the one color true
the Green of Faith and Envy
	my eternal hope and your selfish desire
the Yellow of Jealousy and Fear
	which neither of us may ever erase
the Orange of Fruitfulness
	wherein Love once grew, fragrant and sweet
the Red of Martyrs and Anger
	death of the innocent, whose blood-color is as rage

projected from the Black Void of 
your false Spirit, I am pierced as
you gaze beyond me, as though I were
a weak and fading spectrum 
already dead 
already powdered nothingness

Why must you 
	see me 
		through these colors  
when I looked upon you with
		 the clear light of Love?


C2009  Thomas Lee Rhymes  May 2009

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Date: 6/30/2024 6:04:00 AM
Wow! Truly remarkable. The first line directly caught my attention and I fell in love with the whole.
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Date: 6/28/2024 11:44:00 AM
Hello Thomas Lee, so nice to meet you. I hope you have a nice weekend. She does not love you. It is a one sided love. I am thinking why is she seeing you in colors? One day you will meet the right person. it is not her. enjoy your day my friend. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2024 10:57:00 AM
Hello Thomas lee, Oh , now i understand. She should have seen you as a lover with a single purpose. Your welcome. Enjoy your weekend my friend./Darlene/
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Thomas Lee Rhymes
Date: 6/28/2024 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Thankfully, it was not a lengthy affair. But, it did produce several poems from my Muse. Thanks for your insight. As for the colors, she was seeing me not as a lover, with a single purpose. but as a combination of emotions (colors). Thank you, again.
Date: 4/22/2024 2:03:00 AM
This is such an awesome piece so happy to read your work here many blessings.
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