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The Red Poppy

The barren trees swayed in the fall breeze the moon cast shadows on leafless branches giving them life like features the forest became spooky as shadows danced about the sound of gurgling water traveled over the distance it became the only sound heard in the night only the moonlight guided them on their way in the stillness of the night they would have to sneak into enemy territory one broken snap of a twig could make them aware silence was of importance they skirted among the trees surrounded the enemy encampment capturing them without a shot we now wear red poppies to brave soldiers of the past so we never forget the lives lost in war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/22/2019 3:40:00 PM
beautiful tribute, my friend - hope you're doing well & that it's a little warmer there xx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/24/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thanks Jack. I should drop you a note one of these days. Spring has finally arrived and it is great. Had a great winter without any illness YAHOO. Have a awesome weekend. love phyl
Date: 11/26/2018 11:57:00 AM
This is such a lovely tribute to those who fought and died in war Phyl. : )
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Date: 11/15/2018 6:10:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … we cannot forget those brave men and women who faced danger and sacrifice daily. I went to our local Remembrance Day ceremony last Sunday and reflected on the named crosses of district folk who lost their lives in WW1. It was very moving with red poppies everywhere - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/25/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Nice to see your comment. Hope all is well with you. love phy
Date: 11/6/2018 1:43:00 PM
- Beautifully written - The value of silence, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/25/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Anne lise for your comment. Writing has been sparse lately. Muse took another holiday. lol. Have a great day. love phyl
Date: 11/5/2018 10:21:00 PM
I love how well you chose your words for the imagery and wonderful metaphor of your excellent poem! Beautiful and a treat to read, Phyllis! :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/25/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem Laura.

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