The Red Poppy

The barren trees swayed
 in the fall breeze
 the moon cast shadows 
on leafless branches
giving them life like features
the forest became spooky
as shadows danced about
the sound of gurgling water
traveled over the distance
it became the only sound
heard in the night
only the moonlight
guided them on their way
in the stillness of the night
they would have to sneak
into enemy territory
one broken snap of a twig
could make them aware 
silence was of importance
they skirted among the trees
surrounded the enemy encampment
capturing them without a shot
we now wear red poppies
to  brave soldiers of the past
so we never forget
the lives lost in war.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Horne Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:40 PM
beautiful tribute, my friend - hope you're doing well & that it's a little warmer there xx
Babcock Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Thanks Jack. I should drop you a note one of these days. Spring has finally arrived and it is great. Had a great winter without any illness YAHOO. Have a awesome weekend. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:57 AM
This is such a lovely tribute to those who fought and died in war Phyl. : )
Laurie Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Hello Phyllis … we cannot forget those brave men and women who faced danger and sacrifice daily. I went to our local Remembrance Day ceremony last Sunday and reflected on the named crosses of district folk who lost their lives in WW1. It was very moving with red poppies everywhere - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thanks my friend. Nice to see your comment. Hope all is well with you. love phy
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:43 PM
- Beautifully written - The value of silence, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Thanks Anne lise for your comment. Writing has been sparse lately. Muse took another holiday. lol. Have a great day. love phyl
Leiser Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:21 PM
I love how well you chose your words for the imagery and wonderful metaphor of your excellent poem! Beautiful and a treat to read, Phyllis! :)
Babcock Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem Laura.
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