The Red Planet

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Black holes; the Milky Way of the galactics marooned....

Within their curtain call chambers of Galetorias pretexted signs

Twisting lines; terrestrials always reading into and beyound 

Monisms minds spinning about in these vortex pools of thought?!

Grasping at stars to interpret what's not aneath this, Jurrasic mark....

Beastialities within the finest forms carved; bay windows in bizzare

Choices by behemoth spirits which perish amid this moment they starve 

Scratching the surface upon foreign times afore shadows descending

To form their eyes these images pretending, to be other than they are!?

While as exhaling this dust of permeatings both near and afar in 

Galaxies exploding; knowing that they have been dead for awhile....

And the purple speaks, within tainted poisons gathered along this

The paths of lost; emitting its aura in the wake of these crumbling 

Eminent comets, now crashing into the waters of eternals wrath?!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

....“`The Red Planet` * Written ¤ 11•27•08” ¤
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cooper Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 1:38 PM
what a glorious pen you have here!
A   Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 12:23 AM
JOHN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! VERY LOVELY..`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
Chachere Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:22 PM
mysterious, yet the universe is so open. last line sounds intense and almost as your words are racing,great write,John ~Always&Forever Lynette
Shetley Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:29 AM
I alway enjoy poetry about planets... nicely written. I have one entitled 'pluto'... not a very creative title but it works for the piece I think! Thanks for the read, always a pleasure.
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:01 AM
Happy Birthday dear john,quite busy lately,try to be back to read you and my soup friends : )love C.c
Puddifoot Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 4:21 AM
what a beautiful thought, this is actually a lovely monoku :-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace