The Red Planet

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Black holes; the Milky Way of the galactics marooned....

Within their curtain call chambers of Galetorias pretexted signs

Twisting lines; terrestrials always reading into and beyound 

Monisms minds spinning about in these vortex pools of thought?!

Grasping at stars to interpret what's not aneath this, Jurrasic mark....

Beastialities within the finest forms carved; bay windows in bizzare

Choices by behemoth spirits which perish amid this moment they starve 

Scratching the surface upon foreign times afore shadows descending

To form their eyes these images pretending, to be other than they are!?

While as exhaling this dust of permeatings both near and afar in 

Galaxies exploding; knowing that they have been dead for awhile....

And the purple speaks, within tainted poisons gathered along this

The paths of lost; emitting its aura in the wake of these crumbling 

Eminent comets, now crashing into the waters of eternals wrath?!

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....“`The Red Planet` * Written ¤ 11•27•08” ¤
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/8/2012 1:38:00 PM
what a glorious pen you have here!
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:23:00 AM
JOHN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! VERY LOVELY..`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/5/2011 1:22:00 PM
mysterious, yet the universe is so open. last line sounds intense and almost as your words are racing,great write,John ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:29:00 AM
I alway enjoy poetry about planets... nicely written. I have one entitled 'pluto'... not a very creative title but it works for the piece I think! Thanks for the read, always a pleasure.
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:01:00 AM
Happy Birthday dear john,quite busy lately,try to be back to read you and my soup friends : )love C.c
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Date: 7/18/2011 4:21:00 AM
what a beautiful thought, this is actually a lovely monoku :-)
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