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The Red Parasol By Alfred Glendening

Standing with admiration in front of, "The Red Parasol" by: Alfred Glendening.
My thought blends and melts into the colour of every brush stroke on the canvas.

Into a daydream haze, I vanish moving slowly onto the sand.
Warm grains of sand seeping between my tan toes.
Sunlight holds my face up with its golden streams;
I take a deep breath of the cool refreshing breeze,
Embracing me with its tendrils of briny sea scent 
Weaving through my hair lulling me to calmness.

I approach the two girls, deep in conversation.
One in blue sitting on a rock holding a bouquet of wildflowers,
The other girl in pink sitting by her red parasol.
I seem to be invisible;
I listen to their conversation of secret love.

After a few minutes I stroll out,
Sit on the beach and take in the view with hunger, 
Taste the sea's harmony and grace.

A tap on my shoulder brought me out of my trance.

"Venice, are you ready to advance to the next canvas?"



5/6/2016

The Red Parasol, 1895 by Alfred, Jr. Glendenin...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rycroft Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Very well written x congrats on your win x
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:07 PM
I love your enchanting visit into the painting, Eve, and relishing in the imagery you shared while there. Congratulations on your fine win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Sandra, congratulations to you too. Hugs Eve
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 10:07 AM
I've been there, lost in a piece of art. Well written Eve.
Roper Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, James, congratulations to you too. Hugs Eve
Chansarkar Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful,congratulations Eve
Roper Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Sara, for the congratulations Hugs Eve
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May 13, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Eve, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:26 AM
Thank you , Linda , I'm tickled your back. Hugs
Misra Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Entranced by the poem as you were in front of the painting. Liked the last line - you didn't get trapped there forever! Great poem, Eve. Congrats on your win. ~kc~
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Thank you. Karam, ...Hugs Eve
Cheema Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Amazing Eve! Enjoyed walking on the sand with you!
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, Balveen. Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:33 AM
i really felt you in the scene, eve.. greeat word painter you are!.. hugggs
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 6:35 PM
wow, Eve, I agree with silent ONe. This is surely one of your best!! I think you are someone who did the contest exactly as told to by her instructions. Loved it.
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I will take inspirational complement like these any time. Hugs Eve
Vaso Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Knowing you are are also such a talented artist, this poem carries even more meaning!! Hugs
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, Arthur, these is actually my painting , but a copy of the great artist. Hugs Eve
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