The Red Parasol

These short minutes of my girlhood
have lingered for years
from the day I took the shortcut 
through thickets and crickets
imagining you
standing on shore
before the turning white waves
twirling your red parasol
smiling, almost flying in wind
as you saw me emerge.

Reality slapped me down hard
crashing the shore
as you sat a snail’s breath away 
clearly engaged in girl talk
expressive and hushed
with a young lady
dressed in blue
leaning on a large rock;
I could not see her face,
but you saw me 
and looked away.
I’ve become the fretting sun,
your red parasol,
the shade.

The Red Parasol by Alfred Glendening - Poetry Contest
July 3, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Rita, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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July 3, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Great well written The ending was brilliant well thought of, a good version x
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