The Red Parasol

I remember the painting, with a heavy heart....I
remember my best friend Valerie, how we sat and talked.
which was beating the most my heart or the sun
as in the shade of my red parasol
memories of my lost love drench my thoughts.  
How we looked up at the golden cliffs
 when we walked the seashore.

the sea in all its glory like a millpond,
just rolling rippling waves as it hit the shore,
how I sat there with my dear friend from schooldays 
remembering those times long ago,...those
sunny days are etched into my soul. 

we sat on the cliff top with my red parasol 
shading my head and my heart,
consoling myself with thoughts, remembering 
the seaweed smell of the sea we had both loved,

life would be so wonderful I related to my friend 
if only.......!!!


Penned 22/6/2016

Contest. The Red Parasol
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Seren, congratulations on your nice placement in 'the red parasol' contest! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Seren, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Eve....Seren
Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations, Seren, on this winning poem. "...my red parasol shading my head and my heart."
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Hi Faye thank you for commenting....Seren
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Hi Faye thank you for commenting....Seren
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Congrats Seren, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks Teddy I was surprised but pleased.....Seren
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