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The Red Parasol

I remember the painting, with a heavy heart....I remember my best friend Valerie, how we sat and talked. which was beating the most my heart or the sun as in the shade of my red parasol memories of my lost love drench my thoughts. How we looked up at the golden cliffs when we walked the seashore. the sea in all its glory like a millpond, just rolling rippling waves as it hit the shore, how I sat there with my dear friend from schooldays remembering those times long ago,...those sunny days are etched into my soul. we sat on the cliff top with my red parasol shading my head and my heart, consoling myself with thoughts, remembering the seaweed smell of the sea we had both loved, life would be so wonderful I related to my friend if only.......!!! Penned 22/6/2016 Contest. The Red Parasol

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Date: 7/8/2016 4:58:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your nice placement in 'the red parasol' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/8/2016 10:44:00 AM
Seren, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Eve....Seren
Date: 7/8/2016 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Seren, on this winning poem. "...my red parasol shading my head and my heart."
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:44:00 AM
Hi Faye thank you for commenting....Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:39:00 AM
Hi Faye thank you for commenting....Seren
Date: 7/8/2016 6:39:00 AM
Congrats Seren, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Teddy I was surprised but pleased.....Seren

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