Alkas Poetry Poet Free verse

The Red Bled Blue

remember when the red of your lipstick
it made me feel high... but now that red
bled blue into my life
and i only kiss memoirs


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Excellent interaction by Arturo Michael:
'I feel i could die'
it could be the brilliant ending of the poem mey above ... grateful dear poet

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Ann Foster February 17, 2020 at 12:15 PM Omg... I am so sorry... and sad... so much in so few words... excellence shines... Ann

Arturo Michael February 16, 2020 at 6:13 AM This is good... if I can add, I'd use this "And I feel I could die" for my last line...just an idea that came to me... Alkas Poetry February 17, 2020 at 4:29 AM Excellent interaction by Arturo Michael: 'I feel i could die' it could be the brilliant ending of the poem mey above ... thank you dear poet salute alkas