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The Red Bled Blue

remember when the red of your lipstick it made me feel high... but now that red bled blue into my life and i only kiss memoirs Excellent Excellent interaction by Arturo Michael: 'I feel i could die' it could be the brilliant ending of the poem mey above ... grateful dear poet

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Date: 2/17/2020 12:15:00 PM
Omg... I am so sorry... and sad... so much in so few words... excellence shines... Ann
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:13:00 AM
This is good... if I can add, I'd use this "And I feel I could die" for my last line...just an idea that came to me...
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Date: 2/17/2020 4:29:00 AM
Excellent interaction by Arturo Michael: 'I feel i could die' it could be the brilliant ending of the poem mey above ... thank you dear poet salute alkas

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