The Receptionist

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The receptionist smiled and captivated the room. Her beauty and curves made the men swoon. She was all business when she talked, But they forgot about business when she walked…

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David Bose

Date: 10/23/2016 6:52:00 PM

Takes me back to days of my dad's secretaries ... didn't quite understand the dynamics back then, but you state them nicely. Thanks.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/23/2016 8:23:00 PM

Thanks David :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/23/2016 5:11:00 PM

A little wiggle goes a long way:) Fun read Brenda.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/23/2016 8:23:00 PM

Yes it does. Thanks Danny.

Carol B.

Date: 10/23/2016 3:53:00 PM

Seen this happen :) Great write.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 10/23/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thanks. Haha! I think it happens a lot.