The rebellious cheeses

I had only just heard that UK cheese was revolting.? Not mildewed or slimy which could be
Insulting? No.! even the cheeses have it seems had enough of that quyeer kahmer
Nonsense and stuff.' It seems they're egged on by mother goose? Probably a code name
If what I hear is truth? The thing all got started because of some cows Daisy and Ermentrude
Were insulted and how..? This angers all cheeses! the Leicesters are mad red.' And some real Tough chedder is about to shed, its cool staid image before all is said.' As sure as
Grass makes hay.' And cows our milk, we need un-tarnished cheeses not some man made
Filth.' Yes cows have farted.. And will again' and humans grew strong and repulsed some pains the
Products great' its allways been green.) Like the farmers fields a beautiful scene..Yet over to
The cheeses.' Who are on the roll.' They want to escape from (old kahmer's) intended gaol
I think this cheesy battle could come true.? Here's trusting to human acumen though it's another way to get
Through.'

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Date: 1/2/2025 3:39:00 PM
I think you are on a roll here, Joe. Lots of competition and dirty tricks if want to be the big cheese. Australians have got Philadelphia cream cheese which is hard to beat. Like your style Joe you could become a big cheese on the soup. Regards David in NZ
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/2/2025 11:39:00 PM
A most Krafty comment David' I suppose many brands have Gone since my time long?? I have a small tub in my fridge Btw..I forgotton it was from home lol.))) Now that its spread far and wide so to say Hey maybe it subliminally inspired me.? All the best mate Glad to see jack-ass-cinders is Gone from your life btw.!!
Date: 9/13/2024 5:48:00 AM
Cool cheese poem, Joe. Congrats on a great win
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Date: 9/2/2024 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about the "Cheese Wars" write. Mother goose would be a great code name. Have a day filled with cheese/fun as you write away.....................
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/3/2024 12:38:00 PM
I do Not know why you would be blocked. I do Not know how to do it. Soup mail me how to take it off. Blessings..........
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/2/2024 10:55:00 PM
Yes just checked..YOU HAVE ME BLOCKED)))) I wonder if She'll get an echo?? Who Knows??
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/2/2024 10:53:00 PM
Hello Paula..' I suppose I Still cannot comment on your Page?? Ih well All blessings)
Date: 9/1/2024 3:41:00 PM
Amazing work! Loved the detail of British names and locales. Congrats on claiming 4th place in my contest, Joe! Always a high scorer in these contests! Perennial!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/2/2024 10:52:00 PM
Hello matt, All blessings and my Thank you for the placement I Hope the process went as smooth As a calabreze.?? More cheese Anyone?
Date: 8/19/2024 1:12:00 PM
Love the word play on revolting cheese. That was so clever.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/19/2024 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment On this cheesy slice Andrea You've been really really nice!
Date: 8/19/2024 8:46:00 AM
Creative one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/19/2024 10:17:00 AM
I hope it does well Sara And thank you for reading!
Date: 8/15/2024 8:20:00 PM
Crazy, no crazy talk about farting cows in the past. Just crazy!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:36:00 PM
I'd heard this in the mists of Time Kim 1977 / 78 ?? I of Course gave it creedence a Girl a but older had been told By a teacher at college we were Standing near either the memorial hall or scout hut? in Wodonga Vic. Late afternoon? So you can see how long the Narrative has been jn train.!
Date: 8/15/2024 2:53:00 PM
Something needs to revolt, that's for sure. Artificial everything will be the way of the future, for those who survive the 3 billion purification kill-off to save good old Mother Green Earth. Green the new religion replacing Christ. We are in a mess, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/16/2024 6:55:00 AM
Venting, I hear you. No need to apologize -- I get it. Even Christ turned over a few tables I've read somewhere. Shouted at the Sanhedrin. Blessings my friend.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:31:00 PM
The pagan green god..' has snuk Up on the world..All it needed was for Christianity to become Polluted I see (still all was written ) AND WE HAVE ALL PLAYED BAD PARTS..! highlighting not shouting here Talking to me as mucb as anyone else.)
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