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For Unseeking Seeker's Contest " The Rebel". Dated September 22, 2026

The Rebel


 Line of inquiry:
“Neither desire nor aversion 
Meditation our immersion
Conditioned beliefs discarded
Hymns we hum are our own version”


In the live network of unassailable design,
layer on layer my latticed mind is stratified.
The spiritual strata of innate awareness aligns
with the sagacious patterns of perception.

In my introspective journey within
my soul confined within the meditation crypt,
suffuses me with the supreme essence of piety,
liberates me from the dungeon of corporeal abyss,
taking me away from the unsure domain of conviction
in search of the divine light.

Many existential attributes of sole distinction  
gain access to the sanctum of the psychic recess,
transcend through the undefined time 
the fading limits of desire and aversion,
while the  fluid sense of conditioned  beliefs
flows abandoned from the cauldron of mindfulness, 
merges with the sea of absolute consciousness. 

I then hum the immutable hymn 
of my sanctified soul,
that echoes in the melodic strata 
of the harmonic awareness.
The devout mantra intoned 
in the temple of my heart 
resonates with the sublime symphony 
of the sacred spirit in the realm of divinity.
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 5:46 AM
In my introspective journey within my soul confined within the meditation crypt,.. the fading limits of desire and aversion…and the musicality of the final verse. Nicely done, Subimal!
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