The Realities of Life

Brightness of the sun
Things are different in them both
Darkness of the moon

By: Misty Leccese
© June 15, 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 2:47 PM
this one makes me wonder if you are talking about more than just sun and moon!
Rider Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Both your posted poems are wonderful Misty. It takes patience and talent to write a good haiku and senryu. Thank you for your comments also. Will be looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Trudy~
Goff Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 7:34 PM
yes, Misty! well done! jim
Jordan Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Misty I loved your senryu - leaves a lot of room for contemplation - God Bless, MJ
Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Clever Haiku>>James
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