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The Real Feel

We used to hear of “wind chill factors” From the weatherman, Which meant that it felt colder out When windy times began. So if the temp was 35, But gusty breezes blew, The wind chill factor might have made It feel like 22. Today that phrase has been replaced And here’s the latest deal - Despite the temperature displayed, We hear of the “real feel.” You’d think that would appeal to me, That catchy little rhyme, But since I’m change-resistant, I prefer the prior time When I took into account the way The wind would add its chill, So I’d know if extra layers Or a scarf would fit the bill.

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Date: 3/22/2025 9:00:00 PM
Oh, Ilene. Get with it... ~ From a man without a smart phone. lol.
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Date: 3/21/2025 6:46:00 PM
brilliant as every Ilene, i still say you should put your poems into a book! if i can do it you certainly can ! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/21/2025 12:51:00 PM
I love this ilene…..you have such a gift( l think l may have said this before but lm saying it again anyway ha!) for being able to write about ‘everydayness’ not sure thats even a word ha….and creatively making it into interesting, entertaining and funny poems. Now thats a talent and what a legacy to leave behind your daily activities ,thoughts,’just who you are’ written by you for your loved ones….! Debx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2025 6:45:00 PM
I agree 1 million percent i just couldnt have described it as well as you did Deb! Ilene is our very own soup Irma Bombeck! hugs jan xx

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