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The Ravens Caw

The ravens caw, Raps around my flesh, It ravages my mind, Like an empty house. Empty yet not, as scarred is the lover of this house, Her words are bitter, But they echo sweetly in this empty house. Yet the ravens caw, Has, left its mark, on my flesh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 9:00:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Guy-Adler. Love, Carol
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