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The Raven

Moon celestial red
In Erie fog filled bog
Where hundreds of grey 
bones lying in wait
Oozing blood curdling cries
Risking fears in the eyes
In ones fathers eloping 
Into the blackness 
no judgment here
Fears are embraced 
Hell awaits gazing through
The fiery cavernous hole
The hunched  Raven stands 
Alone atop of deadwood
Wings outstretched
The Sentinel
with eyes wide open
Stands gothic form
Night of dread has commenced 
The living dead are sommoned 
Ravens cawin laughter seals his fate
 Raven oh Raven where is my daddy
I shaunt look for him
just want to know where he lies
I won't be bringing any flowers
Raven,its best be forgotten 
Hell is no place for mere mortals 
Only for raven and that forgotten 
soul

Copyright © Tonytocaa Camacho | Year Posted 2015

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Anna Hopper Date: 8/7/2019 10:49:00 AM Nice! Login to Reply Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 8/7/2019 2:14:00 PM Thank you Anna...hugs tonytocaa

Ann Foster Date: 8/4/2019 3:41:00 PM sadly... not to forget a single soul... :) What a great write. Excellent. Ann Login to Reply Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 8/7/2019 2:16:00 PM Thanks a million Ann glad you like peace be you tonytocaa

Anton Smith Date: 9/12/2015 4:46:00 PM Dramatic, descriptive, great use of imagery and very well written. Very well done! Would you care to look at Facebook page Gothic: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=tn_tnmn Many thanks and keep up the good work. :) Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 4/16/2015 4:18:00 AM Excellent pen Tony! A very deep and profound piece, dear friend.Nice imagery.A 7 from me! Thank you again for visiting my page.Much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D. Login to Reply

Michael Quinn Date: 4/8/2015 6:52:00 AM gruesomely descriptive, and so well put... like it a lot Login to Reply Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 4/8/2015 7:28:00 AM Thank you Michael Quinn,it's not about me,it's about people like you that share in the freedom to express without walls and hesitation,really free and without boundaries never expecting anything..thank you again for visiting my world my heart my verse..keep coming back your always welcomed..Tonytocaa

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 4/4/2015 5:25:00 PM So dramatic with great imagery. :-) Login to Reply Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 4/4/2015 5:33:00 PM Thank you njeri,for your kind words,and happy Easter to you and yours..tonytocaa

Jan Allison Date: 4/4/2015 1:33:00 PM spine chillingly brilliant descriptive write - such vivid imagery Tony! Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 4/4/2015 2:41:00 PM Thanks I look forward to you commenting,I appreciate it any way it takes time for me to find the right image as you well know,trying to reinvent myself lol. A rose to you ;-))..Tony the one and only lol Jan Allison Date: 4/4/2015 2:20:00 PM Ohh I love the image Tony it wasn't there when I read the poem the first time:-) the images you find are brilliant and i love reading your poems my friend:-) hugs jan xx Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 4/4/2015 1:54:00 PM Thank you jan,always a pleasure to hear from you and your positiveness,your friend ..thanks tony